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    In my opinion, highways should be given preferential fiancing.

     

    First, highways are the foundation of on-land transportation.

    The vehicles driving on land can be useless without highways. Can you drive your Porsche in a cornfield.

     

    Second, highways are also the basis of economy. 

    Since a considerable part of business still relies on traditional highway-transportation, highways play an important role in economy. For instance, lots of remote villages, mostly in developing countries, still suffer from poverty and backwardness. One of the reasons to explain their situation is that they are lack of transportation approaches, highways in particular. And that lead to mere communication between them and the outside world in terms of commerce, culture and education.

     

    Third, With regard to today's major traffic problem, highways are efficient ways to resolve it or ease it at least.

    With the booming of economy, more and more people can afford private cars. As a result, an increasing number of cars present tremendous pressure to our traffic system. Traffic jam is one of the manifestations of the pressure and is, certainly, the most urgent one. How to solve it? In my opinion, regarding this issue, we should keep focused on highways. Only By enlarging the capacities of existing highways and meanwhile building new roads, together with carefully programming as well as implementation, can the problem be efficiently settled. Nevertheless, we can’t achieve all these effects from public transportation.

     

    Fourth, public transportation is indeed of significance for part of the population.

    It is true that purchasing private cars represents the tendency of the times, but we have to mind the fact that there is always a group of persons who don’t own cars. For this group, maybe public transportation is the optimal choice though buses are often late and crowded and metro stations are quite far away. In other words, before they become persons who have private cars, they still take public transportation regardless of its disadvantages.

     

    Fifth, the improvement of public transportation doesn’t meet the demand of solving traffic problem.

    As I mentioned in the above point, the customer group of public transportation is relatively fixed. That is, those who have cars would not take buses or metro, even if advancements of them are expanded. For whatever progress has taken place, its nature of public will never be changed. However, people now prefer customized services to public services; therefore, public transportation is not a favorable choice for this part of people who already enjoy customized services. Thus the amount of vehicles on highways will not decrease because of public transportation, so increasing input in public transportation would not solve or ease traffic jam.

     

    Now we can come to conclusion: As a part of social welfare, the improvement of public transportation enables a certain group of people to benefit from it, however, it doesn’t make big change on the current traffic condition. Highways are serving as basics of transportation system and more importantly, of economy. By enhancing highways, our traffic problem can be solved or eased with high efficiency.

     

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    tim v2o5wrote:
    1、用firstly,secondly,thirdly..
     
    2、感觉一二两点还是合并起来比较饱满
     
    3、 backwardness感觉不太好,poor economic condition好一点
     
    4、One of the reasons (to explain their situation,可以不要) is that they are lack(去掉are) of transportation approaches, highways in particular.
     
    5、And that lead to mere communication between them and the outside world in terms of commerce, culture and education. (鉴于最后列的这三点,我建议把这一段主题改为transportation system, especially highways, lie as the foundation of the development of the whole society in various aspects.
     
    6、第三段首句需修改,我改了一个版本:Thirdly, with regard to today's major traffic problem, investigation on highways is more efficient to resolve it or at least ease it, compared with developing public transportation.
     
    7、how to solve it?这一句可以不要,鉴于后一句中有regarding this issue这个插入语
     
    8、we should keep focused(our focus) on highways.
     
    9、Thus the amount of vehicles on highways will not decrease because of public transportation,(加入moreover, because of the relatively fixed market of it, the government investment cannot make profit. ) So increasing input in public transportation would not solve or ease traffic jam, neither can it increase government's fund .
     
    10、Now we can come to (加the)conclusion (加safely)
    Sept. 7

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